"How to Create Hypnotic Headlines"
by Joe Vitale
Dr. Scott Lewis is a comedy-hypnotist performing
at the Riviera Hotel every Monday night in Las Vegas. He called me one day
wanting a truly hypnotic ad to run in the local newspapers to pull in
college students to his show. I asked him to tell me what he already had
in mind for the ad. Here's what he told me:
"I'm thinking of using the headline 'Come do
outrageous things at the Riviera next Monday night'."
What do you think? Me, I didn't think it was a
very hypnotic headline.
For one thing, it's not engaging. It just sits
there. It's slightly active, in the sense that it says, "come do
outrageous things," but that's not enough to truly mesmerize busy readers
of newspapers. Not today. And not college students.
For another, his headline would eliminate all the
shy people from going to the show. They might be afraid they would get
hypnotized and look stupid in front of their friends. After all, far more
people want to be spectators than performers. Scott would miss his target
audience.
I advised Scott to try the following headline
instead:
"What outrageous things will you see your friends
and others do next Monday night at the Riviera?"
Now we have something truly hypnotic.
First, the question involves the mind. It forces
you to begin thinking of WHAT you will see next Monday. And it begins the
process of having you IMAGINE outrageous things.
Second, this new headline isn't confrontive. Good
hypnotic headlines sneak in under the radar and deliver their message.
This new ad says what will "your friends and others" do, not what will YOU
do. See the difference? It makes it safe for you to go to the show. Your
friends "and others" are going to look like fools, not you.
All headlines can be improved by doing just three
things:
1. Make them engaging.
My favorite way to engage people is to ask an
open-ended question. How can you use an open-ended question when writing
your next headline? (I can hear your mind whirling.)
2. Make them curious.
People are naturally curious. Appeal to their
curiosity and you can hypnotize them into doing almost anything. What can
you make them do with a curiously hypnotic headline? (Note how your mind
is again buzzing.)
3. Make them short.
When Scott asked me to review the ad with my new
headline, I realized we could add a shorter headline before the longer
one. This way we could telegraph our message and then pull people into our
hypnotic headline. So I advised him to make the main headline, "Think
you've seen outrageous?" We then used the longer headline ("What
outrageous things will you see your friends and others do next Monday
night at the Riviera?") as the secondary headline. Don't be afraid to use
two headlines, as long as the first one is short and leads into the
longer, more hypnotic one.
Finally, how did the new headlines pull for Dr.
Lewis? Just call the Riviera in Vegas and try to get into his "Hypnolarious"
show next Monday night. You'll find his show packed – and you'll be amazed
at the outrageous things you'll see your friends and others do on stage
there!
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